Ah, the burial tombs of Conan’s people! Another great chapter.
I think maybe having all three sentences in the following end with question marks might make sense: “You mean make sons to carry my memory? Recite my genealogy. Recount my deeds….”
Of course the Cimmerians had to make an appearance! And I agree, that reads better :-) Thanks for reading, taking the time to offer suggestions, and for your kind words!
Ah, the burial tombs of Conan’s people! Another great chapter.
I think maybe having all three sentences in the following end with question marks might make sense: “You mean make sons to carry my memory? Recite my genealogy. Recount my deeds….”
Of course the Cimmerians had to make an appearance! And I agree, that reads better :-) Thanks for reading, taking the time to offer suggestions, and for your kind words!