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Great chapter!! So many good things. Character, theme, imagery. It’s got it all.

I’m curious why Aric cuts his arm with his sword before bed. Was this explained in an earlier chapter, or will it come into play later? Thanks!!

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The details of the horse-breaking were fascinating, especially to me who has no experience with horses at all. Did you happen to see a movie that came out about 4 years ago called “Mustang”? It was really moving. It’s about convicts out West who work with wild mustangs to try to tame them and sell them at auction. The main character forms a deep bond with the mustang he’s paired with.

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