Man, this was intense. Rich characterization with the puzzling over what to do with what the Victorians would’ve called “her unfortunate condition.” I’ll be interested to see how this plays out.
I think the first paragraph could be nicely broken into two papas at this place: “While the court headed from the Volosdanu into the bend of the Pantikap River....”
Man, this was intense. Rich characterization with the puzzling over what to do with what the Victorians would’ve called “her unfortunate condition.” I’ll be interested to see how this plays out.
I think the first paragraph could be nicely broken into two papas at this place: “While the court headed from the Volosdanu into the bend of the Pantikap River....”