I enjoyed the description of the music and how she reacts to it. Also, the last sentence is perfecto! And I really enjoy the wheel of time discussion. I know I’ve mentioned it before, but Gore Vidal’s “Creation” does a similar 5th century BCE peoples from different backgrounds discussing theological and mystical topics like this.
Separately, I personally think a period instead of a question mark would read better at the end of this sentence: “Tell me about it—the Hunt?”
I enjoyed the description of the music and how she reacts to it. Also, the last sentence is perfecto! And I really enjoy the wheel of time discussion. I know I’ve mentioned it before, but Gore Vidal’s “Creation” does a similar 5th century BCE peoples from different backgrounds discussing theological and mystical topics like this.
Separately, I personally think a period instead of a question mark would read better at the end of this sentence: “Tell me about it—the Hunt?”